i just thought i'd share one with ya'll i wrote last night.

Lions Mouth of Faith

out in the chasms of sight,
your mind begins its flight,
roaming the great plains of beasts,
viciously barbaric to your feast.

branching away from the home,
grazing the land you roam,
finding the nexus of nascent,
throned as present.

legacy of innovate,
a demise to my replicate,
captured beyond my time,
flowered lime.

squired to service,
assisting the nervous,
stolen life of pride,
swimming asylum died.

laying across the wooden bricks,
prodded by the sticks,
weary on the battlefield,
blistered and bruised i've kneeled.

lasting thread to hear,
listening to its colorful fear,
start to believe,
taken my soul for relief..

battling the lions mouth.

cool

In-line Six

''dont ride on four 24's
got 315-pound ft of torque
dont go off runing my clicks
but i have an in-line six

i role on bbs's
dont go of bsing it
dont use that hemi sh*t
i got an in-line six"

u guys like it? i wrote it. im thinking its gonna be a song but i haven't picked a beat yet. i like the beat for 50cent called "bich get in my car" its in his album the massacre. it'll be the chorus

i saw it on your sig, so i thought i might put myself to some use on my off time. all comments are encouraged..

hehe got some good ones here ;)

keep em comin eh

i used to write alot before i got hitched. then she went away and i started writing off and on. i know i get it from my mom, she has a few of hers published in some book. i just wish i had kept the ones i had written in school.

wow u sound old. r u like mid 20's or 30's? i have a personally question. suprra r u asian? im sorry if i offended u in some funny way so i apologize ahead of time. if u get offend.. umm... dont take it offencively :(

i got another one:

"if its a race then i won
but dont think that u wont have no fun
if u talk shyt about my car, then look into my gun
u got a hemi so u get cocky and yell that u won
but by the time u switch to 2nd gear im as good as gone

what if i run my click
what if u eat my shyt
dont talk about the supra and i wont call u bich
its obviously concieted u ain't gonna do shyt
so go on and take your bich
tell her to suk yo dik
then you remember that last night thats what yo momma did"

LOL why on earth would you think i'm asian haah

nah i'm a kiwi girl ;) new zealander

awsome. but isn't that like a 3rd world skyline invested place?